Monday 25 February 2013

Bobbie admires someone close to her...


She,



She is the one who loves me,
She is the one I can tell everything to,
She is the kindness incarnated,
She can help me whenever I need her,
She is, and
She will be here for me forever.
She misses me a lot... because
She is far away from me now but
She is strong
She is perfect like she is.
She is the person I admire.
"She" is my lovely sister.

And I love her. <3

37 comments:

  1. Your poem is sooo cute ! I'm sure " She " is glad to have a sister like you ! :)

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    1. Thanks!
      I hope she is ;)

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    2. I forgot to say that I'm Bobbie.

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  2. Mrs P. , did you made a mistake? You put "to" after "She is the one I can tell everything" if not I don't understand..

    Bobbie.

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    1. Don't you know I never make mistakes?^^
      It's "to tell something TO someone" or "To tell someone something" (ex: "I tell her everything"). Here, it's "she's the one I tell everything TO" (construction!).

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    2. Yes I know but in a moment of innatention you could made one ^^
      okay I get it! thanks Mrs P. :)

      Bobbie.

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  3. It's very beautiful, I love my sister too.
    Folt

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    1. We must love our sisters and brothers, our families.

      Bobbie.

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  4. So cute ;)
    Personnally, my sister make me crazy.

    Tsitsa.

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    1. Thanks! :)
      Sometimes she makes me crazy too but I love her :)

      Bobbie.

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  5. I don't have any sister but this poem is lovely !

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    1. Brothers and Sisters are great!
      Thank you!

      Bobbie.

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  6. I find that nice the idea of a poem to show your admiration Bobbie !

    Rider.

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  7. It's so cute !!!! Beautiful declaration :')

    K-ZA.

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    1. I know, I know ;)

      Bobbie.

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  8. It's cute !!!!
    SweetLisa

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  9. I'm sure she's happy to have you as her sister !
    SweetLisa

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    1. I hope she is, for my self I am ! :)

      Bobbie.

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  10. Oh cute :)
    I have no sisters to know what you actually feel but i find your little article very sweat
    ~Amazilena~

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  11. Just in case: when you say "She misses me"...don't you mean "I miss her"?

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    1. Yes I mean I miss her thank you Mrs P.!
      But now she's back so I don't miss her anymore <3

      Bobbie.

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  12. I will tell my elder brother to check this article. :p
    I find that quite ambitious the idea of making a poem like that in english ! But, when it comes from heart, everything become easy, right ?

    Holysnail

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    1. It's not exactly a poem but sort of.. ^^
      Yes it came from heart, so it was, and for her so .. <3

      Bobbie.

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  13. I dont like this idea of poem , its to easy , and i hate the ease.

    BlackMan

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    1. It was maybe easy, but she is the one I admire so even if it was, it was for my sister. <3

      Bobbie.

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  14. I'm Bobbie's friend, she told me to come to this blog that's why I'm here. This article is very beautiful, your sister must be very happy. She must be an angel for you said that :) Sincerily is very lovely.

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    1. Hello Bobbie's friend: thank you for visiting our blog!

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  15. It's cute. I'd like to have a sister who write me things like that.
    Cockatoo

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  16. It's very beautiful. Good work :).

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  17. this is so cute

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  18. I'm coming for Bobbie, I Know her sister. I like her poem, It's so cute and sweet!
    Coco.

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  19. I'm a friend of Bobbie and I find her declaration so pretty :)
    I think it's honorable using this way for open her heart.

    Mathieu.

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  20. This is so beautiful !
    So cuuuute !
    Lala

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