You tell me that you will go to a pool party ?
For what ?
Just drink and smoke all this precious time.
I
think you're reckless about them like it was the last
day of my life.
It makes me think of a story that I would like to tell you.
I was
sixteen and had a crush with the most beautiful guy of my high school (a
gorgeous brown haired guy with blue eyes and quite tall) but I was too shy to
hit him.
It was the time of Summer parties and the biggest Party of the Year was
coming.
I expected to see him at this party but my dream was more than true
because with a beautiful poem he invited me to this party.
Arrived at Tina McGoan's villa
on the Coast I saw my best ennemy Dolly Johnson, such a pest.
I think we were
ennemies because we were in love with the same guy.
And secretly I expected
to crush her that night.
The party had just started and she hit him like a leech.
She
was pathetic but she didn't know that I was smarter than her.
So I weaved in
and out until the bar and ordered a big cocktail with pinapple in it.
Yes I was
a pest too.
I came closer to them in dancing as if I was pissed. And my delicious
cocktail «unfortunatly» fell on her wonderful hair at the same timeI ended up in my
crush's arms.
Dolly quickly runned to the toilet with her hair drenched with cocktail
and pieces of
So after having fun during two
hours in Tina's Mother's pool with half the people of Beverly Hills.
The cops
(called by Dolly the Pest who wanted to ruin the Party) knocked at the door to
drag us off.
Luckily my crush had a car so I jumped in it with him and Tina, and
one other girl that we didn't know at all.
Jamy, a real partygoer also took his
car and followed us to flee the cops but Dolly the Pest succeeded to jump in
his car too. Crap !
We decided to go on the city hills to end the party on a high
note.
He stopped his car when we arrived a bit more higher than the Hollywood
sign.
We went out of the car and admired the beautiful view of Beverly Hills by
night.
The hundred of shop lights lined the streets and colored the blacks
shapes of Beverly Hills.
Suddenly we caught sight of a big luminous beam which
got closer very fast to us.
That was Jamy who was pissed and wasn't able to
drive on a road and crashed his car on a tree near the road.
Him and Dolly
succeeded to get out and kindle the rest of his car wreck.
The fire seemed
to touch the sky as if it would set ablaze.
Dolly took advantage of this event to
be consoled by my Love.
I was furious and I decided to play a trick on this
little pest.
I succeded to steal her shoes and threw them at the bottom of the
Hill.
Tina agreed with my act and kept Dolly busy while I tried to
convince my crush and Jamy to go to the beach.
We jumped quickly on his car and
Tina jumped too leaving Dolly-the-pest alone and barefoot on the road.
At last I
could enjoy the rest of the day with Johnny. The man of my life, your
grand-father.
That was our first date the most beautiful day of my life full of
love since I kissed him for the first time 79 years ago on that beach.
Very long article Maddie haha ! It was great =P
ReplyDelete- Chamallow
I expect it was entertaining. Thank you my Chamallow :)
DeleteYes it was aha don't worry :P
Delete- Chamallow
You're welcome =)
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Great anecdote, even if it was difficult in the beginning, it looks like a beautiful love story !
ReplyDeleteYour relationship with Dolly was so violent, jealousy is really dangerous ahah
Interesting article !
See you soon, -Pegasus
I've tried to tell how are relationships between young adults which aren't always nice and sweet but contentious and violent. The message to my gran daughter is that she had to fight to succeed in her life. Thank you Pegasus
DeleteThat's an interesting message indeed!
DeleteYou are welcome Maddie -Pegasus
Great article !
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Thank you Bumperyey !
Deletei and i'll always love your stories Maddie
ReplyDeleteWe are both genius writer :D
DeleteYou are such a pest ! BUT I LOOOOVE IT !!
ReplyDelete-Harley
Oh yes I know it :P:P:P but I do with it...
DeleteWHAT A LIFE !
ReplyDeleteSecrets are revelated :D
That wasn't a secret ! Everyone knowed... :D But I'm joking, my character isn't like me, because she is a socialite and i'm not ;(
DeleteBe social, be happy !
DeleteAnd obviously everyone knowed that xD
what a life ! Madridista
ReplyDeleteAn wonderful american life full a money and love too yes :)
Deletereally romantic
ReplyDelete-Bruhh
Actually Like me ❤
DeletexDD
Deletevery interesting comment LinxZ :) yse
DeleteLike all the time.. (I'm joking) :)
DeleteMaybe it's a true story haha, it's a story wich is very famous and use in films, books, series... but it was cool ;)
ReplyDelete-Reese
Yes actually I think stereotypes makes the best stories. That's why I use those clichés to make a story for what everybody can say "Hum that's makes me thinking about something!" and love it.
Deletegreaaaaat article !
ReplyDeleteThanks ! :D
Deletegood article maddie!
ReplyDeletedz-pnl213
Thank you Dnl-pnl213 :)
Deletesuch a nice love story, xoxo #yse
ReplyDeleteThank you Yse xoxo too ❤
DeleteA lot of clichés in this story... Can you explain me why you choose a love story ? Is there a morality behind or it is just a story like that?
ReplyDeleteI've chosen a love story because i'm a little bit sentimental and I also think that Love is everywhere. My message throughtout this story is (like i've said to Pegasus) that you have to fight to succeed in your own life and also that you need to enjoy your day to live wonderful things like in the story the wonderful view of Beverlyhill at Night...
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